Change in Chapter 30

Hey guys!! I am so sorry, I made a mistake in chapter thirty of Luna’s generation. It says “Final Comment: Submission refused. Forced agreement needed.

Collins, Wisteria: Unknown illness prescribed, surgery needed, surgery failed. Deceased.

HOWEVER I forgot that in Calcifer’s generation, Kay told him that Penny had originally been terminally ill. I forgot to explain that Jay had lied to him. So I changed it to the following:

Final Comment: Submission refused. Forced agreement needed. Do not tell K.

Collins, Wisteria: Terminal illness discovered, no cure. Deceased.

-blushes- sorry about that! And thank you. :3

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4 Responses to Change in Chapter 30

  1. B says:

    😛 Its fine, I kinda forgot about that 😛

  2. zefiewings says:

    In a story this twisty, there are bound to be some oversights.
    Though I was confused for a second because, obviously, it was already changed by the time I read it. 😉

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